March 5

 After reviewing and revising my literary argument paragraph, I made several changes to strengthen my writing. I clarified my claim so it was easier to understand and made sure my evidence clearly supported my main idea. I also added more explanation in my analysis to show how the evidence connected to my argument instead of just summarizing the text. Revising helped me organize my ideas better and make my paragraph clearer and more effective. 

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